Help my speech please? URGENTT ....I HAVE TO MAKE THIS SPEECH BE AN A GRADE SPEECH...HOW CAN I?

It is a good quality speech, but I feel like you are just throwing facts at me, which caused your paper to lose my attention. In order for this to not happen to whoever you're giving this speech to, I think you should lose some facts and try and incorporate something fun while being informative. It's also about how you deliver it, so as long as you practice and don't be shy/monatone, you should do great!